Nature’s reverberation
rhythmically taps at my sense;
Started flowing
with cool breeze – hence,
Feathering and
fiddling on God’s nature,
Greenish grasses,
Saffrony Oranges, Whitish Pigeons to nurture.
Dawn’s rays penetrate
forehead through the window hole;
Nutrifies and
activates the body in whole.
Prays to get
rid of the World’s gruesome attitudes, just;
Sickens and
sinks the mind in disgust.
Sharpen the
ears of the reason – My Lord, to analyse.
Bloody tears
from the heart – My Lord, hinder to mobilise.
Libya Time: 2:15 pm to 2:45 pm (25-06-2016-Saturday)
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Rhyme Scheme: aa, bb, cc, dd, ee
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Paraphrase of the Poem: The drastic changes happening both in the minds
of the materialistic people of this world and the reaction of angry nature push
the poet into nervous state. Even though the poet realises the truth and seeks
the way to find a solution, the poet still faces failure and finally surrenders
before the Almighty.
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Stanza – 1: The poet compares greenish grasses, saffrony
oranges, and whitish pigeons with three religious practices in India.
Stanza – 2: The poet discusses about the negative attitudes
and vigorous behaviour of current generation with the fellow human beings.
Stanza – 3: Finally, the poet fails and surrenders before the
God to help the world.
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Stanza – 1 and
2 are Quatrains.
Stanza – 3 is
a Couplet.
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